Rewrite the following paragraph of Julie's essay to eliminate irrelevant information. PLS HELP ASAP SOMEONE PLS ASAP 55 POINTS PLS

Today we rely on technology more than we realize. We can use technology for communicating, learning, and even shopping. My family buys everything online, and we never go to the store anymore. Technology has made our lives easier, because we don't have to go anywhere to get what we need or to talk to our friends. With technology, you can talk to your friends no matter where they are. If you need to order more detergent, you can just ask your phone to order it for you. I wonder who named the technology assistants. Technology has also changed the way we learn at school. Now we have online textbooks, type all of our assignments, and rarely use paper. We are saving the world! Not everyone thinks technology is great, but I think it has changed our lives for the better.

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Explanation:

Today we rely on technology more than we realize. We can use technology for communicating, learning, and even shopping. Technology has made our lives easier, because we don't have to go anywhere to get what we need. With technology, you can talk to your friends no matter where they are. If you need to order more detergent, you can just ask your phone to order it for you.  Technology has also changed the way we learn at school. Now we have online textbooks, type all of our assignments, and rarely use paper. Not everyone thinks technology is great, but I think it has changed our lives for the better.

i used to know but i learned it a long time ago sorry

explanation:

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)