Please Help Me ASAP: Only Answer If You Can Actually Help). Short Story" The story may be based on real life, or completely made up, or anywhere in between. They may be ideas you think of on the spot or ones you've thought of before but never written about. Steps to take: Exposition, Complicating Incident, Rising Action, Climax, Falling Action, plot, Introduction, Main character, Second character, Third character ( optional). " {Here's my story that I wrote so far ->(Ounce upon a time their was a girl living in a cabin in the woods. She lived there with her grandmother and she loved the woods. Her name is Melody, and it suited her perfectly. Melody loved animals and nature. Most of her days and nights Melody spent them wondering around in the woods watching the animals. Melody grandmother she was getting older and couldn't do much by herself anymore. The second day Melody day Melody went into town to get some food and supplies that her and grandmother needed. It was a very lovely day, but then after awhile she noticed some Storm clouds were heading in. Normally Melody loves the rain until after she got home. Melody went into a store and bought some food and a first aid kit, because when you are running around in the woods you might get hurt. On her way back home Melody walked around the corner and there was a momma deer and baby deer and she come to a stop. The deers were looking at her and she was looking at them for a few minutes Melody was overcome with excitement. She has only seen a buck before. Melody was thinking to her self that they were beautiful deers. The mama and baby deer started running to get away and then Melody started running after them, she couldn't catch up with the deers they were way to fast for her. She ended up running into a beautiful pond with fish and frogs in the pond. The pond had beautiful flowers, and lots of beautiful wildlife trees, animals and different kinds of plants. The baby deer ended up getting a scratch from one of the plants so, she tried to help the deer but it wouldn't let her at first. But then eventually she was able to help the baby deer with his scratch. Then Melody ran home to put the groceries away and sat down and told her grandmother about her amazing adventure that she had experienced). "(Can someone read over my story and make sure I added all the steps that were supposed to be used and make sure that I used all the commas right If anything needs to be added to make my short story better you can add information to it). Will Mark Brainliest. Needs to be at least 500 or more words. ( I have 337 words so far). (ONLY ANSWER IF YOU CAN ACTUALLY HELP). Please Don't Respond If You Dont Know How To Help. Will Mark Brainliest.

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Ounce upon a time there was a girl living in a cabin in the woods. She lived there with her grandmother and she loved the woods. Her name is Melody, and it suited her perfectly. Melody loved animals and nature. Most of her days and nights Melody spent them wandering around in the woods watching the animals. Melody grandmother, she was getting older and couldn't do much by herself anymore. The second day Melody went into town to get some food and supplies that she and grandmother needed. It was a very lovely day, but then after a while, she noticed some Storm clouds were heading in. Normally Melody loves the rain until after she got home. Melody went into a store and bought some food and a first aid kit because when you are running around in the woods you might get hurt. On her way back home Melody walked around the corner and there was a momma deer and baby deer and she comes to a stop. The deers were looking at her and she was looking at them for a few minutes Melody was overcome with excitement. She has only seen a buck before. Melody was thinking to her self that they were beautiful deers. The mama and baby deer started running to get away and then Melody started running after them, she couldn't catch up with the deers they were way to fast for her. She ended up running into a beautiful pond with fish and frogs in the pond. The pond had beautiful flowers, and lots of beautiful wildlife trees, animals and different kinds of plants. The baby deer ended up getting a scratch from one of the plants so, she tried to help the deer but it wouldn't let her at first. But then eventually she was able to help the baby deer with his scratch. Then Melody ran home to put the groceries away and sat down and told her grandmother about the amazing adventure that she had experienced).

everyday, people all over the world are making sacrifices; all for different reasons. some people may choose to do more simple sacrifices, like, "my daughter is receiving an award at school, but i also have an appointment, so i will decide to cancel that appointment to be there with my daughter" although she is cancelling her appointment, she can easily reschedule it, and spend her time with nore important thungs in life: being there with her daughter. this will make her daughter happy too because she is recieveing an award for her hard work, and it brings us happiness when our hard work is noticed and appreciated.

on the other hand, some people dont know when to make a sacrifice, ir bow to make one. well, making a sacrifice is when you do something for someone else other than yourself, for someone else's happiness, not so you can gain something in return. you do it for them, not for you. so, anyone can make a sacrifice, even the most simplest ones, like giving up the tv for a sibling or a sibling with homework, when you could be doing something else. the point is to others, when you can be doing something else. you do it out of the fact that you want to them, not so that it can benefit you.

making sacrifices benefit people in many ways, it can bring a smile to there face knowing someone is willing to and bring kindess. alot of people tend to feel unwanted and that no one is there for them, but if we show kindess and sacrifice the less importnat things in life for the most important things in life, people will once again feel happiness and more at ease knowing that someone is or was there for them, even if it be only once.

hope this , and let me know if there are any typos, it's hard typing on a phone : )

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)