The sun slowly fell deeper and deeper into the horizon. I need an audience point of view on this phrase for my writing narrative so please give honest and relevant opinions on your views.

Try to be more descriptive. Change "deeper and deeper" to "The sun began to slowly sink further into the horizon as the night creeping"

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I think that the overall idea of the description is good but I just feel like, maybe it could be worse more where you get a better sense of how it might look. kind of giving it that fancy but also story like touch to it to make it seem both real but that of a description coming from a detailed memory.

Heavy objects warp the fabric of space itself

A black hole is a place where the laws of physics as we know them break down. Einstein taught us that gravity warps space itself, causing it to curve. So given a dense enough object, space-time can become so warped that it twists in on itself, burrowing a hole through the very fabric of reality.

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