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Advantages and disadvantages of distance learning
Distance learning has become one of the solutions
1. The topic sentence states the topic and the controlling idea 1
to global pandemic and it has its own advantages
like convenient learning from home and
2 The paragraph includes 23 main supporting ideasa
disadvantages like missing opportunity to meet
The main supporting ideas are developed by providing specie details 0 and socialize with new people. First of all,
There are no off topic ideas that break the unity of the paragraph
distance learning is very convenient. Students can
learn and listen to lectures straight from the
Transitional words and phrases link ideas in the paragraph
homes or dormitory. Moreover, students
distracted by other people they
& The paragraph uses a dear method of organization
can
focus on learning material
. Finally,
2 The concluding sentence follows logically from the points made in the
illy, distance
learning is great for people with social anxiety
who can be safely at their homes
to
omes listening
the
However, distance learning has its own
& There is no informal colloquial language in the paragraph D
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Social new people
university experience where you could talk to
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like-minded people, socialize, go to parties and
11. The paragraph is revised for punctuation 0
just have some fun. To sun
sum up, distance learning
is perfect for convenience, however you miss the
chance to meet new people.
dents are not
mainly
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paragraph D