Can someone please check my work, grammar, etc.. what do i have to change n stuff.. it’s a business letter. Thankyouu in advance!

At the end, with the thank you statement all is says is “for your time” not “Thank you for your time.”

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particulars about treasure island, from the beginning to the end, keeping nothing back but the bearings of the island, and that only because there is still treasure not yet lifted, i take up my pen in the year of grace and go back to the time when my father kept th

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d understatement