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Instruction. Complete the following statements.
A Portrait of Yourself
1. The best thing(s) I ever did was (wero)
2. I wish I could lose my fear of
3. I know I have the talent to
4. I enjoy people who
5. I admire
6. I feel most productive when
7. Tam motivated by
8. Talmost never
9. My idea of fun is
10. Work is exciting when
11. The best advice lever got was
12. The thing I value most is
13. If money were no objoct, I would
14. It is easy for me to focus on
15. My idea of a perfect life is
16. My best days are
17. My dream is
18 I always wanted to

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