Is this a good story?

Hey! I'll tell you what I think in the explanation.

Explanation:

What was his dream about? I reccommend putting more "drama" into your story. Like this:

He was excited to tell everyone about his dream even though they probably wouldn't believe him. (Name of your character)(Is it alright if I call your character Jim for the example?) Jim couldn't contain himself in his excitment but he bore it patiently. Maybe.. Just maybe Jim would tell his closest friends. But even if no one believed him, Jim knew that his dream was real and that was something he would never forget.

I hope you like it and that i helped! Wonderful ending of a story though!! :)

answer: b. grete might have remained as shy and immature as she was at the beginning of the story.

one of the most interesting characteristics of gregor's metamorphosis is that, although he is the only character who has physically changed, it is this same change which triggered a transformation in the rest of his family.

by taking care of gregor, grete has become stronger and more confident. she has found a life outside of the house, and has become more independent and self-sufficient. the novel implies that the trigger for the change is gregor's own transformation, and that without it, grete was likely to remain as shy and immature as she was at the beginning of the book.

explanation:

d understatement