Which revision of the sentence best helps create a more vivid description?
When I wasn't performing at the top of my game in school, Uncle Charlie
asked me to come and work for him. At the time, I believed he was just
going to load me up with work until I discovered the value of working
hard at an assigned task.
When I wasn't doing well in school, Uncle Charlie sat down for a little talk
with me and asked me to come and work for him at his car wash. Back
then, I believed he was just going to load me up with work until I slowly
learned the true value of working hard.
When I wasn't doing well in school, Uncle Charlie asked me to come and
work for him. I thought he was just going to force me to spend long hours
on my feet toiling away with a scrub brush and bucket of soapy water
until I learned the value of working hard.
When I wasn't performing at the top of my game in school, Uncle Charlie
asked me to come and work for him-at his car wash. I thought he was just
going to assign me immense amounts of work until I eventually realized

Read this excerpt of "from blossoms": from laden boughs, from hands,from sweet fellowship in the bins,comes nectar at the roadside, succulentpeaches we devour, dusty skin and all,comes the familiar dust of summer, dust we eat.which word create a positive mood?

Read the passage. size matters when you are hosting a conference. trenton place is the largest convention center in the country, boasting 2.6 million square feet of space. over the course of a year, trenton place will host over three million visitors for public exhibitions and trade shows. trenton place is also home to big sky theater. the theater is one of the largest theaters in the city, equipped to host concerts, plays, and seminars. what is the best use of ellipses to shorten the passage? size matters when you are hosting a conference. . the largest convention center in the country, boasting 2.6 million square feet of space. trenton place is also home to big sky theater. . one of the largest theaters in the city, equipped to host concerts, plays, and seminars. over the course of a year, trenton place will host over three million visitors for public exhibitions and trade shows. . home to big sky theater. trenton place is the largest convention center in the country. . trenton place will host over three million visitors for public exhibitions and trade shows.

Which would be the most appropriate type of document for the situation