Need help fast Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.
Which is the best revision of sentence 5?
1. I remember when Ben first had the idea for a
community garden. 2. We were walking home from
school past an old abandoned dirt lot. 3. Ben stood and
stared through the fence for awhile lost in thought. 4.1
thought he was acting strangely. 5. I was walking by the
dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with
a shovel
We were walking by the dirt lot again, and there was
Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.
The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot
again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a
shovel
o I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was he
digging up the dirt with a shovel.
O Finally, I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there
was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.

The correct answer is The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot  again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a  shovel.

Explanation:

In this passage, the narrator describes experiences related to the creation of a community garden. In sentence 5, the author describes what seems to be the beginning of community garden "I was walking by the dirt lot  again, and there was Ben digging up..."; however, this sentence does not show the relationship between this event and the events previously described.

In this context, it is necessary to add a time relationship or at least a connector that shows how Been acting strangely led to him began working to create a garden. According to this, the best option is "The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt..." because this clearly shows this last event occurred after Ben decided the dirt lot was a perfect place to create a community garden.

The correct answer is B:The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot

again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a

shovel.

Explanation:

id say it means hes fearful and/or cautious

have a good day

write two paragraphs to compare and contrast the narrators’ schools and explain how their schools shape their perspectives toward the hijab. cite evidence from the text to support your ideas.

copy and paste answer:

two paragraphs to compare and contrast the narrator's schools would be this, the one school with the veil is the one school were the students were forced to wear the veils, and they did not know why they had to wear the veils. the girl student writing the story was not like the other students, she didn't care. in the second school there was a lot of hostile activities going on throughout the school. most of the students were upset and this, including the author, but she was trying to look and the good side of things.  

overall, both schools had something that the students or most of the students did not like or appreciate. what you can learn from these stories is that life will never be exactly how you may want it to be. complaining about your lifestyle will only make matters worse or at least feel worse in the long run. that's happens to be the information you can interpret from these two stories.