Simple sentence to complex sentence

she was too poor to educate her children.

Which revision, if any, best fixes the bolded (capitalized in this case) part of the sentence? female cardinals, a somewhat drab bird compared to the males, blend in well with their environment. no change somewhat drab birds a somewhat drab's bird somewhat drab bird's

Write two sentences that incorporate 'imagery' (all of your senses) to describe a place that you like to visit.

Which statement is most clearly objective?