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Schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm
box and that caused a miscommunication during the
Chicago fire of 1871.
O Schaffer told another person in his office to sound the
wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication
during the Chicago fire.
O Schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm
box and that caused a miscommunication during the
massive Chicago fire of 1871.
O Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm
Box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a
miscommunication during a fire in Chicago.
O Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm
Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to
an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
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