What was Thomas Paine's primary purpose in writing "The Crisis, No. 1"? A. to force the British government to review its policy of taxing the colonies B. to inspire the common people of America to fight for independence C. to explain the current situation in Britain to the American colonists D. to urge the Americans to seek autonomy through dialogue with the British

adding more details about the struggle rainsford experiences as he swims to the shore

lets none because you provide no details.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.