Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should revise the paraphrase?
Henrique needs to change the sequence of events to be
in a logical order.
Henrique needs to add some descriptive language to
make the story come alive.
Henrique needs to add some dialogue to make the point
of view consistent
Henrique needs to change the point of view to make the
sequence clearer.

ich statement best shows a problem in travels with charley?

one sharp difficulty presented itself. in the intervening twenty-five years my name had become reasonably well known.

this being so, my trip demanded that i leave my name and my identity at home.

i had to go alone and i had to be self-contained, a kind of casual turtle carrying his house on his back.

with all this in mind i wrote to the head office of a great corporation which manufactures trucks.

people wont do this for 10 points you need at least 50

the symbol of the grandfather's heritage in this excerpt from "the medicine bag,” is the beaded bolo tie.

a bolo tie is a cord fastened around the neck with an ornamental clasp which is worn as a necktie. they have been used by native american tribes such as hopi, navajo, zuni, and puebloans since the mid-20th century.

therefore, the fact that the grandfather is wearing a bolo tie refers to his heritage as native american.

i dont kmow it? !