How should this paragraph be revised so that it is correct? The word “soccer” should be capitalized. The comma after “however” should be removed. The word “cat” should be capitalized. The comma after “loyal” should be removed.

In the space below, write a 800-1,000 word fictional narrative with an engaging hook, well-developed characters, conflict, and resolution, effective dialogue, examples of suspense and symbolism, and proper use of creative punctuation, including quotation marks, commas, and dashes.