Jack and Manny are active kids. They swim for the swim team. They play instruments in the school band. They also
like to spend time outdoors. They hike and surf.
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O Jack and Manny are active kids. They swim for the swim
team, or they play instruments in the school band. They
also like to spend time outdoors when they hike and surf.
o Jack and Manny are active kids who swim for the swim
team and play instruments in the school band. Since
hthey like to spend time outdoors, they also hike and surf
Jack and Manny are active kids. After they swim for the
swim team and play instruments in the school band, they
spend time outdoors. They hike and surf.
Jack and Manny are active kids, and they swim for the
swim team They play instruments in the school band
and they spend time outdoors hiking and surfing.