If the author of Lord of the Flies had written "Jack was as feisty as a cornered badger," then the author would have been using the as part of his style

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If the author of Lord of the Flies had written "Jack was as feisty as a cornered badger," then the author would have been using the as part of his style.

onomatopoeia

symbolism

metaphor

simile

personification

Explanation:

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type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.