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Which thesis statement should be included to effectively introduce the claim?
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Too Much Need for Approval
(1) People often think that they are being individuals by
expressing themselves when in fact they are just conforming
to societal expectations. (2) Whether it is through buying the
latest clothing or "king the latest post on social media
people, especially young people. convince themselves that
they are really expressing themselves. (3) However, the
desire for approval shows that people are looking to outside
sources for satisfaction that they should be gaining from
themselves
(4) Taking an interest in fashion can be a great way to see
art in the everyday choice of what one wears. (5) However,
there is also an element of following established
expectations or rules. (6) While there is always some element
of individual variation, most people are really just following
social norms. 17) Most fashion is the result of trends
determined by designers and marketing executives. (8) Teens
A Social media is the only reason that young people copy the ever-changing fashion trends of others and
struggle to develop personal confidence in their own choices.
B. As brain science continues to research how technology affects people, it will become clearer that
technology harms our personal growth
C Young people need to put away their phones and choose to participate in other activities that keep them
away from technology
D. Social media should be used as a platform to express individuality.
E. Looking for immediate feedback generated from clothing choices or social media can hinder a person's
ability to build personal confidence and have a sense of self-worth

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