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Write a descriptive essay in which you use descriptive techniques to describe a place you know well. This essay must be 400-500 words about a place. It should include extremely vivid sensory language, figurative language, comparative and/or superlative adverbs or adjectives, strong word choice, and appropriate voice, tone, and style.
NEEDS TO BE COMPLETELY ORIGINAL!

If someone asked me what is my most impressive city in my career in my life I will definitely say its Shanghai. I guess lots of people would like to select their hometown. Nevertheless it not represent I don’t like my hometown actually I really love it. I was born in my hometown until I was nine years old. After I went to Shanghai, I start to learn another different cultures with my family. Shanghai is one of beautiful cities in China, I think the technology in shanghai is very advanced in China. I love Shanghai it’s very important for me.

 I grow up and become mature all in shanghai. Shanghai is a city that gives me lots of human resources. I study in shanghai form primary school to High school. There are lots of students always contact with me. Shanghai is very big even I have lived in here for seven years but still I have lots of corner that I never been here. These students help me study and have a joyful time together.

 Shanghai is important for me because I become more responsible in here. No matter the teachers or students they all encourage me and give me lots of experiences. I don’t know too much thing or compare with the contemporary students I just like a little boy. When I confront a assignment, I always lose my head and make it mass. Gradually I know the importance of responsibility. People need to seriously to face anything whatever in study or anything else. This is a attitude, good attitude can determine the quality of the result.

 Furthermore, my mum always encourages me to learn some of things out of study. I mean some of skills of ability that school never teach you. For instant, my mum always gives me a opportunity to select a skill of activity and completely support me. My mum inspired me to play the piano, sometimes I hate it because it’s boring when I practice it and the others students are playing a computer game. Actually, after I have a successful performance and my relatives all watch me and give me warm applause that felling is memorable. I need thanks to my mum to support me learn everything I want, I don’t regret because it’s a skill in you brain and nobody can steal it. People who can play the instrument and he or she always have a good impression.

I also want mention my hometown because when I intend to Shanghai is not my idea. My mum strongly asked me to go to Shanghai. My hometown is familiar and warm harboring a few of my closest friends. Shanghai is really important for me, I still can’t forget it. Shanghai has many diverse cultures, it serves as good opportunity for people to see the world.

 I love Shanghai, especially at night the landscape of Shanghai is spectacular. I think most of people all like the night scene. I don’t know what will happen in the future, but undoubtedly It’s significant in my entire life.

i believe that the answer is b! i hope i out!