Hiking is a very enjoyable activity. Hiking is a way to stay in shape. Hiking is a way to enjoy the great outdoors. Hiking with others is a way to build long-lasting friendships. There are free hiking trails all over the United States. A quick search on the internet will pull up hiking trails that are near you. Hiking trails are often labeled using several criteria. Some hiking trails are listed by length. Some hiking trails are listed by level of difficulty of terrain. Some hiking trails are listed by features they possess. Some hiking trails lead up to overlooks. Some hiking trails lead to waterfalls or other large bodies of water. Don’t go hiking too late in the day. Be sure to bring a snack. Be sure to wear appropriate clothing. Wear clothes that are warm enough for current temperatures. Wear hiking boots. Don’t go too fast. Have a great time in the great outdoors.
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Revise this passage to make it more unified and coherent. Add transitions between ideas, combine sentences, and make connections between information clearer.

Read the passage from animal farm. "that was part of the arrangement! " cried squealer. "jones's shot only grazed him. i could show you this in his own writing, if you were able to read it. the plot was for snowball, at the critical moment, to give the signal for flight and leave the field to the enemy. and he very nearly succeeded—i will even say, comrades, he would have succeeded if it had not been for our heroic leader, comrade napoleon. do you not remember how, just at the moment when jones and his men had got inside the yard, snowball suddenly turned and fled, and many animals followed him? and do you not remember, too, that it was just at that moment, when panic was spreading and all seemed lost, that comrade napoleon sprang forward with a cry of 'death to humanity! ' and sank his teeth in jones's leg? surely you remember that, comrades? " exclaimed squealer, frisking from side to side. now when squealer described the scene so graphically, it seemed to the animals that they did remember it. at any rate, they remembered that at the critical moment of the battle snowball had turned to flee. but boxer was still a little uneasy. how does the characterization of squealer support the author’s purpose? squealer's dramatic accusations draw parallels between him and stalin’s propagandists. squealer's uncertainty shows that he is not a reliable ally of napoleon and is ineffective with messaging. squealer's ability to get the animals to listen to him shows that any animal can rise to be a leader in time. squealer's humble interactions with the animals reflect the importance of equality and cooperation.