She looked lacking of energy
out on the front room window.
There he goes, she said to her
self and quickly turned away
from his sight she had been
dumped and dumped hard. He
told her he was in love with her
sister and they have been
seeing each other for weeks on the sly. Without seeming to tell a single soul.

can you please edit this story by reflecting a deeper understanding of setting.

Which sentence corrects the error in pronoun-antecedent agreement? new team members should pick up his or her jersey from the activities office. if a team member is unable to attend a practice, he or she must provide a doctor's note. if students wish to compete, he or she must maintain a grade point average above 2.5. students are not permitted to attend away games without the consent of her parents or guardians.