Which is the BEST way to revise the
sentence labeled 15?

A) Not having received worldwide fame for
their achievements, these inventors'
creations certainly have improved the lives
of many people.

B) For their achievements, these inventors
may not have received worldwide fame, but
their creations certainly improving the lives
of many people.

C) These inventors may not have received
worldwide fame for their achievements, but
their creations certainly have improved the
lives of many people.

D) These inventors may not have received
worldwide fame, but their creations
certainly have improved the lives of many
people, for their achievements,

Crusoes inner struggle with the consequences

Cancer, ‘the big c,’ as it is often called. her doctor felt sure but ordered more tests to confirm his suspicion. while cervical cancer in a woman julianne’s age was rare, her doctor admitted, it certainly was not unheard of in her demographic group. her doctor explained that this type of cancer is often caused by a common virus that many women do not even realize they have. the human papilloma virus can lead to this type of cancer if a woman’s immune system does not fight off the virus in its initial stages. julianne was devastated. her doctor began to discuss treatment options and suggested an oncologist specializing in this type of cancer, but julianne heard very little of what he said. her head was spinning with questions. overwhelmed, she wondered how she would break the news to her family and friends. according to the article, a physician specializing in the diagnosis and treatment of cancer is called

In this unit we learned about arguments and rhetoric. in an argument we use ,not informal language