Which change is the best revision to reflect a formal tone for the speech's audience

The career that i have* decided to present this year is photography. photographers use both aritficial and natural lighting*use a transition sentence when going into the 2nd paragraphso.. photographer? *in order for me to be a photographer* scratch "accomplish this ranking" then say, i must first.. and continue on the sentence instead of different use various*

In 2081, everyone is equal not only in the eyes of the law but in every way; nobody is smarter, more athletic, better looking, etc. than anyone else. hazel is of average intelligence, which means she can't think about anything except in short bursts, and george has an intelligence way above normal.