Using what you learned in the lesson, write an effective hook to introduce your topic and get your audience's attention. Write in complete sentences and state the hook strategy you chose to use.

topic: Should there be real world consequences for what someone posts on social media?

need this done ASP 100 points

Explanation:

I'm not sure what exactly you've learned but here's a potential hook:

In today's society, pressure is placed heavily on social media and how one looks or acts on it. Some users may believe that since no aspect of apps like Instagram or Twitter is necessarily face-to-face, no real harm can come of any mistakes made on these platforms. However, the dedication that so many people, young and old alike, place in these apps makes it very nearly impossible for any measure of one's self worth to be independent from the popularity they receive. It isn't the user's fault, these apps are designed to show us exactly what we want to see even if it lowers our self esteem in the process. On that note, bullying over social media has just as great an impact, if not a larger one, than bullying in school or elsewhere. So yes, the things that are posted by yourself on social media should always be treated as seriously as the things you say in everyday life.

This is very wordy and I actually think if you were to shorten parts of it and distribute them to other parts of the essay you may do better!

:)

i also think the correct answer here would be b.

answer: this is not a good thesis statement because a thesis statement is not supposed to have questions in it. a thesis states your position on your topic. a question cannot state anything because it is not a statement. a question is a great lead in to a thesis, but it can't be the thesis.