Which sentence should Gordon revise to make it more precise, and why? Gordon should revise sentence 1 to provide specific details about what "struck" him as he first entered the room Gordon should revise sentence 2 to describe his dreams more clearly and explain what he hopes to accomplish one day Gordon should revise sentence 3 to replace vague words like "countless" and "delicious" with more precise adjectives Gordon should revise sentence 4 to add detailed examples about the many cooking basics he learned from his parents .