1.
To impress Deepa, his date, Ryan labored over the chicken stir fry; , she took
offense that he was serving meat after she had explained her vegetarianism.
A. furthermore
B. moreover
C. however
D. additionally

I believe it's C.

Explanation:

As a writer, I feel that a suble kind of "plot twist" would probably go there. Such as "However, Deepa was touched about how apologetic Ryan acted for making the mistake, so she shrugged it off and decided to make the best of the night. To her surprise, Ryan was a good guy, and they had many dates after that, never having any more conflict with the food choices."

How was that?

Hope it's correct!

~Kweenie~

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

you're welcome ; p

i could of w this question but i don't see a " passage " .

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sorry ! ):