Is this the correct outline for a thesis?

title: advertising clothing to teens
thesis: are advertisements aimed at teenagers effective? and, are they ethical?
i. advertising aimed at teens is it ethical?
a. aimed at teens
b. ethical
1. varies
2. not ethical
ii. acne commercials
a. possibly aimed at teens
1. teenagers
2. teens have acne
3. puberty
b. back to school advertisements
c. teens to look good for school
d. being in style
iii. are advertisement aimed at teens and are they ethical

Read the excerpt below and answer the question. nice town, y'know what i mean? nobody very remarkable ever come out of it, s'far as we know. the earliest tombstones in the cemetery up there on the mountain say 1670-1680-they're grovers and cartwrights and gibbses and herseys-same names as are around here now. in at least one hundred words, discuss the significance of the stage manager's narration in our town. analyze the text in terms of its tone, word choice, and meaning. what purpose does this narration serve in the play?