Your coworker has asked you for feedback on a department memo she has written help your coworker revise her Memo by identifying and describing three things that cannot be improved

Explanation:

Dear Coworker,

I am writing this in order to share my feedback on your  department memorandum that you had written.

Overall this is a good memo but you can make it slightly better if you adapt below points;

While rewriting you shouldn't change following things

I hope this little feedback will be valuable feedback

Refer below for the answer.

Explanation:

To: Coworker

From: ABC

Date: March 10, 2020

Subject: Feedback for memo

After a careful consideration, the memo is good enough but need some of initial mistakes to be corrected, while revising the Memo I identify three things that shouldn't be improve. See below:

● The main reason for writing the memo.

● The audience for the memo.

● The objective tone.

Hope this helps you out. Looking forward for the good one.

answer: it puts the reader in the place of the elizabethan who has to pay fines for eating meat

(i has to answer this question once too, thats how i knwo the answer)

technical documents should be clear and precise. basically, clarity is the key element in a successful technical document.