Read the sentence from a personal statement
My trip to the car show got me thinking about my f...
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English, 03.03.2020 20:04 sadieruegner393
Read the sentence from a personal statement
My trip to the car show got me thinking about my future.
Which is the best way to revise and expand the sentence to relay the writer's experience more precisely?
I find it's helpful to think about my future and to allow things like my trip to the car show to help me figure it out
Sometimes I get inspiration from a range of sources, like the car show, which maden think about my future goals.
When I took a trip to the cool car show, I saw a lot of sweet designs and engineering a d that made think about my future.
Visiting the car show made me realize that I can combine my interests in design and engineering rather than choosing just one
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