He was sworn into office on January 20, 2001 reelected on November 2, 2004 and sworn in for a second term on January 20, 2005 what correction should be made to the sentence

(01.15 lc) develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience. rewrite this dull sentence to make it dazzling. sandra walked across the street.