Your co-worker has asked you for feedback on a department memo she has writte
memo by identifying and describing three (3) things that could be improved.

Better punctuation and grammar, spelling, more writing/words

Explanation:

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

answer: sure

explanation: i'd love to know everything but that burden is too much to bare.