Choose one example in either essay of weak, incomplete, or irrelevant evidence and analyze what makes this evidence ineffective. How does the writers choice to include this evidence affect your overall impression of the essay and why?

Plagiarism is a BIG no no. If you're going to read and use someones information on a subject, make sure to tweak it. (Ex. If a piece of information says, "Thomas Edison was a great inventor and a huge genius." You can tweak it by saying., "Thomas Edison was a magnificent inventor and an enormous mastermind." Plagiarism can get you in BIG trouble for; cheating, copying and such.

Explanation:

- "the die is cast; i have consented to return if we are not destroyed. thus are my hopes blasted by cowardice and indecision; i come back ignorant and disappointed. it requires more philosophy than i possess to bear this injustice with patience. i have lost my hopes of utility and glory; i have lost my friend."

what passage could you provide the passage.