Hello,
could someone correct the grammatical errors ? i am not english, so i made mistakes. (no need to copy the entire text, but just the mistakes.)

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Not sure how you're going to copy this down, you might need to re-format but I did find a few mistakes throughout the text (not too many.) You wrote quite an interesting essay :)

Explanation:

(FIRST SECTION)

This method was well established, by

claiming to come to fix their water

system, Mr. Bannon took the

opportunity to extract money with

a check for $500 after this false

performance. Throughout October

2019 and January 2020, seven

retirees were the subject of his

practices in the city of Denver. Mr. Bannon was then identified by people who recognized him.

(QUOTE)

This was the first time something like this happened to me in 60 years...

(SECOND SECTION)

change this sentence,

INCORRECT>"A victim testified  and clarified the facts. "

CORRECT >"A victim testified  and clarified these facts. "

(THIRD SECTION):

"He asked me for a check for $500. When I went to get the check, I found out he had ransacked my closets. He stole $300 and some precious jewelry. Shocked, I didn't know what to do or say..."

(note: I wasn't quite sure if he was currently ransacking her closets while she was in the house or if he ransacked her house and then left, so I can only assume that the sentence was supposed to be in past tense.)

(FOURTH SECTION)

Thus, Mr. Banon also took advantage of the vulnerability of the elderly to steal goods such as paintings, jewels, and pocket money that remained in the house.

(FINAL SECTION)

Today, the criminal charges brought against Mr. Bannon are, trademark counterfeiting (for the use of the Denver city water service trademark) fraud, and theft of the goods. Mr. Bannon faces up to 1.5 years in prison and approximately $100,000 in fines.

there is no excerpt.

put the excerpt in the comments and ill answer.

israel is a small country in the middle east about the size of the state of new jersey. the country has a diverse climate with snowy mountains in the north and the hot desert in the south. jordan, syria, and the palestinian authority all border israel to the east. lebanon serves as the northern border and egypt borders in the south.about two-thirds of the population was born in israel. all other israelis come from over 100 different countries. most israeli jews live a lifestyle similar to western europeans and north americans.israel's population is about 75 percent jewish; most of the rest is arab. the israeli-occupied palestinian territories have some 3.5 million inhabitants—about 11 percent jewish, 89 percent palestinian.because of israel's variety of terrain and climate, the country has a large variety of animals. boars roam the damp oak woodlands of the golan heights. caspian turtles live in the marshlands along the coast. and hyenas are prevalent in the negev desert region in the southern israel.israel is the only fully democratic country in the middle east. elections are held for seats in the knesset or parliament every four years. if a party wins 2 percent of the votes, the party gets one or more seats in parliament. no one party has control so they have to work together. the leader of the largest party becomes prime minister.the story of modern israel begins more than 3,500 years ago. most israelis are jews, who are said to be descended from the biblical figure abraham, through his son isaac.

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