Iam writing a persuasive essay and it is about if bullies should be expelled. i need to either find reasons not to or to let them be expelled. i am will to take any ideas.

No, normally bullies have mental problems and are really insecure. And normally take the anger others put in them and give them to other. No, bullies rather should be counseled into not being a je.rk. Unless the do physical harm beyond return.

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

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