Write a letter to your friend describing her about a bravery act done by your classmate rescuing six children from the bus on fire

To,

Antonia

Ogijo

Dated : 22-04-200

Hello Friend,

I trust you are doing well by the mercies of God. The Day preceding yesterday, which was on monday, I saw a very brave act done by my classmate, her name is Senami, a girl who just clocked 19 years of age.

On the day preceding yesterday, I was passing by the ogijo bus-stop, beside the public school. All of a sudden I noticed a huge public in front of the building. I ran as fast as my leg could carry me to the place and noticed that the school bus of Dee-greatest Private College has caught fire. People wondered what the cause could be, some say it was a mechanical fault. I stood shooked, scared and afraid when I noticed six children were in the bus when the bus caught fire, this children should be around 10-13 years of age. They were all trapped in the bus which caught the fire. The driver wasn't in the bus when it caught fire as he was speaking with a staff prior to the event at the other side of the road. The whole staff, parents and passer-by were weeping and screaming.

The fire brigade had not arrived to the scene and the six children were in danger. All of a sudden, a 19 year old girl, who happend to be a classmate of mine, her name is Senami, just rushed into the bus to save these children. Everyone was shocked and were scared. After 10 minutes, the girl rescued these six children and emerged from the bus with them unhurt. The parents, staff and everyone who heard and witnessed the scene appreciated the girl for her braveness. The principal of the school offered her any help that she might require in future. What a courageous girl she was!

Yours friend,

IMANES

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