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interim assessment
performance task-extended response
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think about how the author of the bone wars develop and
cope and marsh over the course of the article. wh
wree gent
rivalry? how is each idea developed and explained? what details support each one?
in your answer, be sure to
• identify three central ideas presented about the rivalry
explain how the text develops and explains these ideas
use details from the article in your answer
check your writing for correct spelling, grammar, capitalization, and punctuation

the answer is b and c

gregor could have been bullying her

could you put the choices and excert up hun

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.