Could you me?

i happen to know how to speak english, i'm learning and i ve been given the task of making a conversation with the verb to be in the present.
the conversation must have similar information to that of the photo and it must also be a little longer.
i really appreciate you me with that.

answer:

does this work

me: hi! how are you?  

sally: (name changed): not so great.

me: really? why?  

sally: my computer isn’t working again. i was in the middle of an important email and i lost it. this is now the third time.

me: oh, i’m sorry. what happened exactly?  

sally: it just froze and i lost the email. i can’t take it anymore.

me: so, what are you going to do?  

sally: so, i’m calling in a guy to fix it again. it’s the same guy. i’m sick of paying him to fix it.

me: have you thought of just going out and buying a new one? a new computer?  

sally: i’ve thought about it. i don’t know. maybe it’s better to buy a new one instead of spending all that money to keep fixing that piece of junk.

me: listen, what are you doing saturday?  

sally: i don’t know. why?

me: if you want, i can take you over to best buy and we can look at some new computers.

sally: you sure? it would be great to go with someone.

me: you know i like to look at computers. i’ll pick you up.  

sally: really? will you pay for it?

me: no, good try. i won’t pay for it, but i’ll go with you.  

sally: i’ll buy you lunch.

me: sounds like a deal.  

sally: ok, what time?

me: how about 11 am?  

sally: ok, good. a lot. i’ll meet you downstairs at 11: 00 am.

me: ok, i’ll see you then.  

sally: ok -- don’t be late.

me: shut up. i’m doing you a favor. (joking)  

sally: ok, see you then.

explanation:

explanation:

i think the person do bellow is correct

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