Type the address in the proper form.
the letter is to be sent to ms. sally r. hansen, who is the manager of the credit department at fleming's department store. the store is in hometown, iowa.
the street is 1234 fourth avenue.
the zip code is 54321.
the return address has been provided.
bill jones
000 elm avenue
hometown, ia

Upper left corner:

Bill Jones

000 Elm Avenue

Hometown, IA 00000

In the center:

Ms. Sally R. Hansen

Manager of the credit department

Fleming's Department Store

1234 Fourth Avenue, Hometown, Iowa 54321

Explanation:

So when writing a letter there are few rules to follow. Addresses are written on the backside of an envelope. In the upper left corner, we write the sender`s address. It is written in separate lines. First line contains the name of the sender, the next line contains his address. In the next line, we write town, state and ZIP code.

The recipient`s address is written in the center of the backside. It is also written in separate lines. First line contains the name, next line contains the title (if we know the title). Next line contains a workplace. These two lines are written if we write a business letter. Next line contains the address with the town, state and ZIP code. If the address is too long, we write this in two separate lines (street, name and number in the first line and the rest in the second).

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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