Which is the best peer evaluation of the conclusion?
read the paragraph.
1. in conclusion, of all the possible careers in film, the
producer's job is the one that's really cool. 2. among its
many prerequisites, the job of the producer requires
creativity, leadership, and communication skills, along with
superior organizational skills. 3. it'll keep you on your toes,
that's for sure
the details and mechanics are good, but sentences 2
and 3 should be reorganized to include logical
transitions.
the word choice and style are good, but there are
punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and
the mechanics and organization are good, but
sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal
style and objective tone.
the tone and style are good, but errors in grammar,
spelling, and punctuation in sentences 1, 2, and 3 should
be fixed.