Iwill you! 20 points!

how can i minimize my story on a 3 page story, instead of a 4 page story. give me some ideas of stuff i should remove.

You can remove the part where your talking about how you feel invisible. You can just say she doesn't pay attention and things like that because in each sentence it just adds a description on how she doesn't pay attention so you can remove some of the sentences.

the water represents a powerful force, and supports the idea that farquhar cannot escape his fate.

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trees or love ? pick wat you think is best