How do the excerpts differ in purpose?
the first excerpt tells what is expected of them, and the
second tells what happens to them.
the first excerpt indicates facts about the camp, and the
second indicates lies about the camp.
the first excerpt shows their expectations about the
camp, and the second shows the reality of their
circumstances.
the first excerpt explains the conditions when they arrive,
and the second explains how the circumstances change
over time.

Read the sentence. the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing only about the same as a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be printed and still look good, it made loads of money. which best revises this sentence to create a more formal style and tone? *the great wave was as cheap as buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made and still look great, people started making piles of money. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing about the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look exquisite, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave cost next to nothing, practically the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look awesome, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, similar to buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made that still looked amazing, those who sold it made tons of money.