An effective argumentative essay must provide evidence because evidence appeals to the reader's sense of logic. the evidence will be used to support the counterclaim. a conclusion cannot be made without it. it explains the source of the claim.

make no change because everything else is correct

maybe i could if you provided more information, such as a image of the text? (;

my favorite song is here with us by joy williams. i love joy williams! you should listen to her songs, they are confident and uplifting. listen to one of her songs now and you will be glad you did. joy williams is a confident singer and she always brings me joy. i am going to sing one of her songs at a concert.