1. recall in what ways does the albatross arrival seem to affect the ship voyage?

you need need more details so we can understand what your asking us.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

they both lost a woman they loved named lenore

they believed they interracted with a talking raven

they became orphaned at a young age.

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