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last year a carnival was experienced by my children and me for the first time. it was a neighborhood school carnival, and many of the the rides and games were enjoyed by the school children. the ferris wheel was ridden by most of the children, creating a lot of screaming and laughter. the dart game was closed after all the balloons were popped. popcorn, hot dogs, and cotton candy were eaten by the children and their families. baskets were awarded in the raffle at the end by the school principal. winning movie tickets was hoped for by our family. next time the school hosts a carnival, i’m sure it will be attended by our family.

The boy and the wolf by james baldwin one day word came that a savage wolf had been seen in the forest. "how i should like to meet that wolf," said little gilbert. he was only seven years old, but now all his thoughts were about the savage beast. "shall we take a walk this morning? " asked his mother. "oh, yes! " said gilbert. "perhaps we may see that wolf among the trees. but don't be afraid." his mother smiled, for she felt quite sure that there was no danger. what point of view does the author use in this selection?

What element does susan b. anthony include in this passage to strengthen her argument?

Which line from the story of my life by helen keller is an example of a simile? during the whole trip i did not have one fit of temper, there were so many things to keep my mind and fingers busy. i was like that ship before my education began, only i was without compass or sounding-line, and had no way of knowing how near the harbour was. one day, while i was playing with my new doll, miss sullivan put my big rag doll into my lap also, spelled "d-o-l-l" and tried to make me understand that "d-o-l-l" applied to both. child as i was, i at once felt the tenderness and sympathy which endeared dr. bell to so many hearts, as his wonderful achievements enlist their admiration.