which is missing transitions, and sounds choppy and disconnected?

With the extra income, the bookers moved to a housing project. "loveman's village was brick," wash said, "and it was warm and well lit. there was a bathtub. it had hot and cold running water. there was a gas heater with a thermostat that came on whenever it got cold." how does this excerpt readers make a personal connection to the story?

Which method of characterization does the author use to the reader get to know mrs. allison? actions appearance dialogue thoughts

Create three sentences describing a chore, each using comparison forms for these irregular words. good bad