In at least one hundred words, use parallel structure and various clause types to add detail and varied structure to the sentences in the excerpt.

use the headings to create an overview of the main points.

to me i think class room sitting education is better. i do online school and i have not learned a think haha. when i sit in the classroom i just sit there and kind of pay attention but still i get so far ahead in the class when im doing online i have nothing else better to do but play video games and i sit in school and learn and have friends and just actually learn. when i'm doing online i sit here listing to music and get on and and look up the answers i guess that is my fault for being a cheater. but to be honest i think sitting in the classroom is better.

maybe attach the passage in case, someone has never read it!

explanation:

hope this

-sawyer

b. our party quickly made its way into the cave / but we failed to find our host [the cyclops] himself inside.