What’s the appropriate way to write dryads are mythological spirts who make its homes in trees

Dryads are mythological spirits who make their homes in trees.

Explanation:

1) correct spelling of spirts > spirits

2) Dryads is plural, so you need the pronoun to be 'their' not 'its'

3) I changed home> homes because presumably the dryads live in multiple homes, but  it could be argued that 'make their home' is an expression and is acceptable.  

4) I would not add a comma before the 'who' because in this sentence it seems that making their homes in trees is an essential part of defining who Dryads are.

the transfiguration of jesus is an event reported in the new testament when god: the meeting place of the temporal and the eternal, with jesus himself as the connecting point,

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