I'm having to write a descriptive poem and i already have written a poem. i just need to make sure this is fine.
my little devil,

my baby devil,
has eyes as dark as the night sky,
it’s teeth as sharp as needles.

my baby devil,
it is just a baby.
she doesn’t know the bad that she can do.
this is why i hide her.
so no one can ever hurt my baby devil,
ever again.

answer:

i wrote something based off of this (just now):

my little devil,

rivers in his eyes,

underneath those waters,

lays the darkest nights,

my little devil,

no story time tonight,

won't you go to sleep,

no tears, no lies, no light,

my little devil,

why shall you hide,

no one will hurt my baby devil,

she'll claw our their eyes,

and under neath the stars you see,

my baby devils heart,

its been struck by lightning,

burned to ashes, and is coming out the dark.

once he has shown himself,

he goes back to hide,

with his legs bent across each other,

and his hands at his sides,

i coax him "your alright"

your my baby devil,

i will never harm you,

i'll you see the light.

(: oh and i like the one you wrote: )

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