Read a literary analysis written by caroline about part 1 of the call of the wild.

when buck is introduced to "the law of the club” by the man in the red sweater, he is humbled. he admits that any man with a club is the law giver. although buck is forced to respect this law, he offers only obedience to the man, never any kindness. jack london explains, "of [kindness] buck was never guilty, though he did see beaten dogs that fawned upon the man, and wagged their tails, and licked his hand.”

how could caroline best improve her analysis?

she could explain how the quotation supports her ideas.
she could cite evidence from the text to support her opinion.
she could include a thesis statement to express her position.
she could evaluate the text to analyze the big ideas and messages.

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

it means the homeless needs more

explanation:

the homeless has no food water homes ect.

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explanation:

ill check : )

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