We are very proud of our school we would like to give you a glimpse into the academic lives of our students.(what is the the best way to correct this sentence? )

You could add futher punctuation and contractions. This sentence isn't grammatically correct either, as it's missing a conjuction.

Explanation:

We're very proud of our school, and we would like to give you a glimpse into the acedemic lives of our students.

You could also write the sentence without the conjuction, but it would have to be broken up into two separate thoughts.

Ex: We are very proud of our school. We would like to give you a glimple into the acedemic lives of our students

autobiography of an ex-colored man is told from the first-person point of view of an unnamed male narrator. he starts his tale by stating that he is going to reveal the great secret of his life. he first takes the reader to his childhood in georgia where he was raised by a single mother. he was dissapointed in his own color.

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