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you have now read and listened to three speeches. choose any two of the speeches, and identify and evaluate the specific strategies used to persuade the audience. be specific and use textual evidence from the speeches as support. consider elements such as rhetorical devices, tone, emphasis, and pace.
make sure to use three vocabulary words in your writing.
your answer should be 2–3 paragraphs long.

i think lincoln used guilt in his address. i think he used guilt and he also used honor. we wanted to honor the soldiers that have fallen. i think he also used remorse because he did not want the war to happen and all those men to die. basically he used emotional texts to let people know the people died on both sides and we should honor the soldiers that had fell.

i also think that king used guilt to let people know they were wrong. he had used some allusions in his speech. he had used some of lincolns speech to let people know how the blacks felt and people should treat them better. his pace was fairly moderate and really serious.

It looks good.

Explanation:

It could use some more Textual Evidence to Support it though.

A basic paragraph structure usually consists of five sentences: the topic sentence, three supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence. But the secrets to paragraph writing lay in four essential elements, which when used correctly, can make a okay paragraph into a great paragraph.

in our power to make a world happy - to teach mankind the art of being so - to a character hitherto unknown - and to have, as it were, a new creation intrusted to our hands, are honors that command reflection, and can neither be too highly estimated,

a) why did you buy only one bunch of bananas ? it's not enough for the party .

b) can i have a carton of juice, ? it looks very fresh !

c) a kilo of milk ? that's 2 pounds, .

d) i've got only one bar of chocolate . you can have a half of it .

e) cut just a small slice of cheese for me . i'm trying to lose weight .

f) do you want a bowl of soup ? it's delicious !

g) can i have a tin of biscuits, ?

h) do you want a loaf of bread ? i bought three .

i) let's buy a glass of wine to celebrate our wedding anniversary !

j) don't leave the jar of honey on the table . the kids will break it .

k) we need to buy some sweets and a bottle of coke .

l) would you like a cup of hot tea ? you've got a cold !

m) can i have a piece of chocolate cake, ? it's my favourite dessert .

n) i bought a beautiful packet of flowers for my mum's birthday .

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